Good morning, winter parents, tutors and children! I wanted to share a set of words from a story I’ve just finished writing, which will be included in an upcoming 11plushappy! book of fiction models. I thought, why wait till the book is out? They might help you now.
Each story model I’m putting in the book comes with a VVV – Very Varied Vocabulary – section, with ambitious vocabulary used in the story, along with meanings as they’re used in the story.
Vocabulary development is a vital tool for eleven plus writing – rare or advanced words, especially if they’ve been revised and the spelling is correct, will stand out from the crowd. Beyond the 11 plus, vocabulary is a superpower to help reading, writing and speaking. As Dr Seuss remarked, “The more that you read, the more things you will know. The more that you learn, the more places you’ll go.”
Remember that some of the words below can have more than one meaning. Indeed, they can also be different types of words. Venture, for example, is a verb for doing something or going somewhere that has risks, but it’s also a noun, the name of a particular venture. (Did you see I added an adjective before the noun to describe it?)
So use these words and meanings below as a springboard. The meanings I give are how I’ve used them in my story, and this can be a very quick hack to getting your child to use them quickly. Do have fun digging deep into all that a word can be alongside this.
Words you can use and what they mean in the story
Volume (noun): How loud something is. (I am talking about flooding river water, so it’s also a pun on another meaning of liquid volume or capacity, which means how much liquid is in the river.)
Pummelling (verb): Hitting something or someone many times, often with fists.
Affrighted (adjective): Very scared or frightened.
Instructed (verb): Told someone how to do something; gave directions.
Principal (adjective): Most important.
Thus (adverb): In this way; as a result, therefore we can say that. A fantastic sentence starter!
Venture (verb): To go somewhere or do something that might be risky.
Wretchedly (adverb): In a very unhappy, miserable way.
Reciprocated (verb): Responded to something in the same way (like returning a smile or kindness).
All-consuming (adjective): Taking up all your attention, energy, or feelings.
Seized (verb): Grabbed something quickly and firmly.
Impulse (noun): A sudden desire to do something without thinking.
Subdued (adjective): Quiet, gentle, or not as strong as usual.
Distressed (adjective): Very upset, worried, or in trouble.
Clacking (noun): A sharp, clicking sound, the sound of knocking stones together.
Inevitable (adjective): Something that is sure to happen and can’t be avoided.
Anguish (noun): Very strong pain or sadness.
Anticipate (verb): To expect something to happen; to look forward to something.
Flood-borne (adjective): Carried or brought by floodwaters.
Prodigious (adjective): Very large, amazing, or impressive.
Silhouette (noun): A dark outline or shape of something seen against a lighter background.
Mercifully (adverb): Thankfully; in a way that brings relief or kindness.
Presently (adverb): Soon; in a short time.
Occurred (verb): Happened; took place.
Clamber (verb): To climb awkwardly using hands and feet.
Makeshift (adjective): Temporary and not perfect, but good enough for now.
What wonderful words. I hope your child will be able to put some or all of these into their writing this week. If your child does add them in a story, I’d love to read it, so please do email it in at leemottram@11plushappy.com.
Right, back to writing the book! Have a wonderful winter day of learning. If you’re considering tuition as the season of winter fire glow, crisp dark nights, Christmas lights and mulled wine begins, do get in touch at leemottram@11plushappy.com. Giving the gift of education could be the most rewarding gift of all. If you’d like to treat a relative – a son, daughter, niece or nephew to a lesson or two, please do let me know, gift certificates are available. And do please visit www.11plushappy.com for paperback books to help your child’s learning.
Have a wonderful winter week of wonder and words.
Lee, London





